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The Fake And Me

I look in the mirror and I see
A girl who looks just like me

But she smiles and I cry
And she's the truth and I'm a lie
She's all together and I'm a mess
She's happy and I'm depressed

But she's doesn't know how I feel
Coz she is fake and I am real

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ive been writting poetry for quite a while now, but have never really shown anyone.. so here is one of them :3

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~xAiedail Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Very beautifully written.
I can kinda relate to this, as I relate to it in a different way. When I look in the mirror, I see a girl with sad eyes filled with shed and unshed tears, who almost cannot bear the burden of life anymore.
When I look at myself, I see a girl with a big smile, who are always happy and insist that she's okay. Yet I know it is fake. But I also know she cannot be anything else, as it would destroy her.
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~BriixD Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, im glad i wrote something people can relate to but im not at the same time because its not something good to be able to relate to. im you know thta feeling D: but thankyou so much. x
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~xAiedail Jan 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know what you mean. I feel the same way.

No problem - it was my pleasure. (;
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~BriixD Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
****im /sorry/ you know that feeling.
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Mood: Amazed ~Hungryforhorror Dec 8, 2011  Student Writer
Epic
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~BriixD Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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~Hungryforhorror Dec 9, 2011  Student Writer
:P. The truth is happiness
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Mood: Joy !srtawberry-hime3 Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
ohh, very nice, well written
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~BriixD Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :3
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*ManiacalFreak Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Great poem, sad, but great! I'm sure a lot of girls/guys out there can relkate to this poem. I'm sur eone of them :)
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